Showing posts with label Tan Renga Challenge. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Tan Renga Challenge. Show all posts

Sunday, December 28, 2014

Ancient Laughter

Carpe Diem "Tan Renga Challenge #66 Jen's Ancient Laughter
Nez Pierce Indians are lead by wayakin or spirits, which young boys or girls receive during a vision quest.  They bestow the powers of the bird or animal that is seen upon the quester.


ancient laughter
captured in a canyon wind – 
yucca leaves, rustling                 (© Jen)


wayakin guardian guide
bestows animal power



Friday, December 5, 2014

Tempting Waves - Ten Renga Challenge

Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge #62, Björn Rudberg's "tempting waves"


tempting waves -
the old boat still needs
a little rest                                               © Björn Rudberg

covered in tall grass and flowers
we read beneath it’s cool shade




tempting waves -
the old boat still needs
a little rest                                              © Björn Rudberg

we scrape the moss covered hull
restoring both boat and dreams




tempting waves -
the old boat still needs
a little rest                                              © Björn Rudberg


lying in sunshine
lulled by gentle pitch



Sunday, October 19, 2014

Tan Renge - River Stone prompt

River Stone prompt from Carpe Diem 
The first poem is our host's response

river stones
caressed by flowing water
                                                                    pale moon shines                                        (Becca Givens)
                                                    
The sound of a waterfall
                                                         Makes the night more silent                            (Chèvrefeuille)


I had many ideas on this one. I think I like the 5th one best.
Here are my attempts:


river stones
caressed by flowing water
                                                                    pale moon shines                                        (Becca Givens)
               
water slips between fingers
tree shadow, not large catfish



river stones
caressed by flowing water
                                                                    pale moon shines                                        (Becca Givens)
               
feet slip on mosey bottom
your memory toppled as well



river stones
caressed by flowing water
                                                                    pale moon shines                                        (Becca Givens)

autumn leaf navigating
rushed on to new adventure



river stones
caressed by flowing water
                                                                    pale moon shines                                        (Becca Givens)
               
tumultuous evening
solace found at river bank



river stones
caressed by flowing water
                                                                    pale moon shines                                        (Becca Givens)        

endless chant of whippoorwill 
increases my loneliness.

Saturday, October 18, 2014

Tan Renga Challenge

The goal of Tan Renga Challenge is to write a second stanza of two lines (classical syllables-count 7-7) towards another haiku. The idea is to complete the Tan Renga is by associating  on themes from the haiku.

Our challenge is to complete Ese's haiku on pine trees.   Here are my attempts:


fingertips
stroking scales of pine cone
                - forest memories        (Ese)

each stroke of piano key
caressing suppressed heartache


fingertips
stroking scales of pine cone
                - forest memories        (Ese)

fingertips digging in soil
burying old dreams and new