for the party goers
the new year’s first sun
arrives too early
early morning
first sun of the year beckons
through the blind
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Troiku from my second first sun haiku
early morning
first sun of the year beckons
through the blind
early morning
awakened
by winter rain
first sun of the year beckons
giving hope of winters thaw
not far away
through the blind
the winter cold
deceptively warm
Yes sitting inside it does warmer than it is.. winter sun is a special kind...
ReplyDeleteYesterday's was exceptionally inviting, blue skies as well ...one of our coldest days.
DeleteOh..these are lovely, Dolores. That troiku especially. So well put together.
ReplyDeleteWell done with the troiku - nice haiku
ReplyDeleteVery nice with the troika.
ReplyDeletevery good ones :)
ReplyDeleteGreat haiku set Dolores, I like both ... I so can emphatize with those party-goers ... for them the first sun will always be to early. Your troiku is awesome, your second haiku is a very nice sleigh to create the troiku. I am so glad to see that you are into troiku ... makes me proud.
ReplyDeleteI love when the sun beckons through the blind. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteOh, a troiku! And exquisitely done, too! Brava!
ReplyDeleteI love the early warmth of the sun
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