Friday, January 2, 2015

Iio Sogi "this autumn sky"



ah, for coolness,
it rivals the water's depth -
this autumn sky
© Iio Sogi (1421-1502)


this autumn breeze
tangled with scents of summer
ah, delight


ah, the warmth
golden fields of wheat beckoning
in the autumn sun                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          


9 comments:

  1. Like the breeze tangled with the summer scents.

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  2. Very nice feel of scent and colours

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  3. So many senses touched here --- very nicely done! :D

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  4. The way I can feel the warmth reflect so well the original haiku.

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  5. The intwining of the senses caught in two great haiku ... thank you for sharing Dolores.

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