Like the breeze tangled with the summer scents.
Thanks Janice!
Very nice feel of scent and colours
So many senses touched here --- very nicely done! :D
The way I can feel the warmth reflect so well the original haiku.
Thanks, I was hoping it did.
The intwining of the senses caught in two great haiku ... thank you for sharing Dolores.
Like the breeze tangled with the summer scents.
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ReplyDeleteSo many senses touched here --- very nicely done! :D
ReplyDeleteThe way I can feel the warmth reflect so well the original haiku.
ReplyDeleteThanks, I was hoping it did.
DeleteThe intwining of the senses caught in two great haiku ... thank you for sharing Dolores.
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