Sunday, January 4, 2015

First sun

Carpe Diem #640 first Sun (Hatshi)

for the party goers
the new year’s first sun
arrives too early


early morning
first sun of the year beckons 
through the blind
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Troiku from my second first sun haiku

early morning
first sun of the year beckons 
through the blind

early morning
awakened
by winter rain


first sun of the year beckons
giving hope of winters thaw
not far away

through the blind
the winter cold
deceptively warm


12 comments:

  1. Yes sitting inside it does warmer than it is.. winter sun is a special kind...

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    1. Yesterday's was exceptionally inviting, blue skies as well ...one of our coldest days.

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  2. Oh..these are lovely, Dolores. That troiku especially. So well put together.

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  3. Well done with the troiku - nice haiku

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  4. Great haiku set Dolores, I like both ... I so can emphatize with those party-goers ... for them the first sun will always be to early. Your troiku is awesome, your second haiku is a very nice sleigh to create the troiku. I am so glad to see that you are into troiku ... makes me proud.

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  5. I love when the sun beckons through the blind. Excellent!

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  6. Oh, a troiku! And exquisitely done, too! Brava!

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  7. I love the early warmth of the sun

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