Thursday, December 4, 2014

Peace

Carpe Diem #618 Peace


peace flowing 
in a river of blood
fallen soldiers



long walk home
cobwebs and demons dispelled
composure gained



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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 4, 2014 at 5:42 PM

    Very nicely done, Dolores ----

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  2. UnknownDecember 4, 2014 at 11:08 PM

    Nice twosome.

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  3. Fascinating QuestDecember 5, 2014 at 2:15 AM

    A tragic price to pay... Is it really peace?

    Long walks are great. In my experience alone time usually works great for composure. And for writing Haiku too :)

    Both Haiku are different.. and touching...

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    1. MarkDecember 5, 2014 at 3:58 AM

      That would be my question too: Is it really peace?

      Shattering Their Peace

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    2. Adas AlcoveDecember 5, 2014 at 8:15 AM

      No, I really don't think it would be. War is such a tragic price.

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  4. AnonymousDecember 5, 2014 at 10:33 AM

    The peace I think comes to those who didn't pay the price and is sometimes taken for granted...again, nice work.

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  5. brudbergDecember 5, 2014 at 12:06 PM

    Peace in blood is usually just the beginning of the next war

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  6. UnknownDecember 6, 2014 at 5:58 AM

    tragically beautiful ... a strong haiku.

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  7. ChèvrefeuilleDecember 9, 2014 at 12:36 PM

    Gorgeous and peace-full ... Dolores.

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