Thursday, December 4, 2014

Peace

Carpe Diem #618 Peace


peace flowing 
in a river of blood
fallen soldiers



long walk home
cobwebs and demons dispelled
composure gained



11 comments:

  1. A tragic price to pay... Is it really peace?

    Long walks are great. In my experience alone time usually works great for composure. And for writing Haiku too :)

    Both Haiku are different.. and touching...

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    1. That would be my question too: Is it really peace?

      Shattering Their Peace

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    2. No, I really don't think it would be. War is such a tragic price.

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  2. The peace I think comes to those who didn't pay the price and is sometimes taken for granted...again, nice work.

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  3. Peace in blood is usually just the beginning of the next war

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  4. tragically beautiful ... a strong haiku.

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