the childless woman,
how tender she is
to the dolls! © Ransetsu (Tr. Blyth)
challenge goals:
5-7-5 syllables
+ a seasonword (kigo)
+ a cuttingword (kireji, in western mostly interpunction)
+ a moment as short as the sound of a pebble thrown in water
+ interchangable first and third line
+ a deeper meaning
ultrasound:
ten tiny fingers
reaching out toward the heaven
profusion of tears
reaching out toward the heaven
profusion of tears
~
cats, cats, and more cats
place setting for each feline
childless couple
place setting for each feline
childless couple
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autumn leaves crumble
glorious splendor over
Perseus shines bright
glorious splendor over
Perseus shines bright
(for TJ)
