Wednesday, February 18, 2015

More Wabi-Sabi

Carpe Diem writing techniques #7



blue shadows
like spider veins
snowy afternoon



white landscape
glistens with diamonds
blue shadows intrude



a bitter morning
cold oatmeal for breakfast
titmouse scolding


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5 comments:

  1. NonnieFebruary 20, 2015 at 7:49 AM

    Cold oatmeal fits with a bitter morning. Your second haiku has wonderful contrast betwee the glistening and shadows.

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    1. Adas AlcoveFebruary 20, 2015 at 9:18 AM

      Thank you Norma! It's always nice to see what people like in a poem.

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  2. ChèvrefeuilleFebruary 20, 2015 at 7:34 PM

    Beautifully composed Dolores ... I like that second the most, it gives me the best Wabi-Sabi feeling.

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    1. Adas AlcoveFebruary 21, 2015 at 3:31 AM

      Thanks Kristjaan, was not sure if any of them captured this feeling.

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  3. UnknownFebruary 22, 2015 at 12:49 PM

    Stark pictures..

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