blue shadows
like spider veins
like spider veins
snowy afternoon
white landscape
glistens with diamonds
blue shadows intrude
glistens with diamonds
blue shadows intrude
a bitter morning
cold oatmeal for breakfast
titmouse scolding
titmouse scolding
Cold oatmeal fits with a bitter morning. Your second haiku has wonderful contrast betwee the glistening and shadows.
ReplyDeleteThank you Norma! It's always nice to see what people like in a poem.
DeleteBeautifully composed Dolores ... I like that second the most, it gives me the best Wabi-Sabi feeling.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kristjaan, was not sure if any of them captured this feeling.
DeleteStark pictures..
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