"jenny wren" is fabulous! Publishable.
I totally agree with Lolly.
Thanks! I really like that one.
Beautiful series --- The first two are so joyful -- lightness in the mundane! The third - such a softly aching feel. Really enjoyed the post.
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed.
Dolores, this series is so delightful. Agree with Jen on lightness in the mundane.
what a precious moment that must have been:)
Yes!
delightful trio.the hammering woodpecker may not be very melodious but it is comforting to hear him tapping.
This one actually has a pretty lows kwirr, kwirr sound that lets me know he is about.
I really love that first haiku.
The last haiku seems laden with sorrow...The Rooster's Singing
lovely...
Thank you Mona glad your like them.
ah - wonderful kitchen haikuand the last one does achenamastejzb
Thanks glad you liked them.
I like them all, very nicely done:)
Thanks!
I'd do the same, stop what I was doing when I see birds visiting my feeder!Thanks for visiting me and taking the time to comment.Nonnie
Your welcome Nonnie
Three wonderful examples of karumi - you use the "lightness" and deceptive simplicity so well. A lovely read :)
Thank you sue!
"jenny wren" is fabulous! Publishable.
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with Lolly.
DeleteThanks! I really like that one.
DeleteBeautiful series ---
ReplyDeleteThe first two are so joyful -- lightness in the mundane! The third - such a softly aching feel. Really enjoyed the post.
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed.
DeleteDolores, this series is so delightful. Agree with Jen on lightness in the mundane.
ReplyDeletewhat a precious moment that must have been:)
ReplyDeleteYes!
Deletedelightful trio.
ReplyDeletethe hammering woodpecker may not be very melodious but it is comforting to hear him tapping.
This one actually has a pretty lows kwirr, kwirr sound that lets me know he is about.
DeleteI really love that first haiku.
ReplyDeleteThe last haiku seems laden with sorrow...
ReplyDeleteThe Rooster's Singing
lovely...
ReplyDeleteThank you Mona glad your like them.
Deleteah - wonderful kitchen haiku
ReplyDeleteand the last one does ache
namaste
jzb
Thanks glad you liked them.
DeleteI like them all, very nicely done:)
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteI'd do the same, stop what I was doing when I see birds visiting my feeder!
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting me and taking the time to comment.
Nonnie
Your welcome Nonnie
DeleteThree wonderful examples of karumi - you use the "lightness" and deceptive simplicity so well. A lovely read :)
ReplyDeleteThank you sue!
ReplyDelete