Thursday, January 29, 2015

First Dream (hatsuyume)

Carpe Diem #658 First Dream (hatsuyume)


first dream of the year
fresh snow in the garden
daffodils shiver 

 ~
the wind stirring
first dream of the new year
with gentle song 

 ~
waking slowly
your arms entwined around me 
first dream of the year




10 comments:

  1. The alignment with nature in the first haiku is textbook stuff - really very good and a fine example to study of a haiku. Nice second and sensual third

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    1. Thank you. I appreciate your opinions alot!

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  2. Simply gorgeous the whole way through :)

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  3. The third one certainly sets the stage for more to come!

    Holiday Dreaming

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  4. Hard to find new superlatives .. I enjoyed you haiku very much and the last one gave me a wonderfully warm feeling.

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