What I really like about this is it is so concrete, real - as the best haiku, and of course it is that sudden moment and movement. Beautiful in its simplicity.
Thank you. I always appreciate your thoughts about my writing. Was not sure if this one worked.
a beautiful flight :)
I was watching the leaves in their final race yesterday - quite a sight.
Very fun, especially if they are blowing out of your yard and not into it. ;0)
Cold and beautiful image ... lovely!
Those whirling leaves will never escape, never find a way out of the impending storm.Exodus
The lines made me visualize the whirling leaves... nice and precise.. :-)
The story of the exodus in the Bible is also one of flight...The Way Out
Yes it was. Lots of stories of people fleeing in the Bible.