Saturday, November 29, 2014

Exodus




whirlwind of leaves
scurry down the street
in front of the snow






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  1. What I really like about this is it is so concrete, real - as the best haiku, and of course it is that sudden moment and movement. Beautiful in its simplicity.

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    1. Thank you. I always appreciate your thoughts about my writing. Was not sure if this one worked.

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  2. I was watching the leaves in their final race yesterday - quite a sight.

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    1. Very fun, especially if they are blowing out of your yard and not into it. ;0)

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  3. Cold and beautiful image ... lovely!

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  4. Those whirling leaves will never escape, never find a way out of the impending storm.

    Exodus

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  5. The lines made me visualize the whirling leaves... nice and precise.. :-)

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  6. The story of the exodus in the Bible is also one of flight...

    The Way Out

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    1. Yes it was. Lots of stories of people fleeing in the Bible.

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