Our challenge is to complete Ese's haiku on pine trees. Here are my attempts:
fingertips
stroking scales of pine cone
- forest memories (Ese)
each stroke of piano key
caressing suppressed heartache
fingertips
stroking scales of pine cone
- forest memories (Ese)
fingertips digging in soil
burying old dreams and new
You've gone in a completely different direction from everyone else -- and it's lovely -- these aching images -- magnificent.
ReplyDeletenice conclusions ... I liked the second best!
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