tilus - a non-rhyming, 3-line poem with a syllable count of 6-3-1.
wild ponies run free
wind blown manes
dance
shadorma - a non-rhyming six-line poem in 3/5/3/3/7/5
forgotten herd
of ponies gallop
over fields
over fields
manes dancing
beautiful muscles ripple
unbridled spirits
You have elicited the feeling of freedom so well!
ReplyDeleteThank you Carol
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