after my walk:
a perfect spiderweb
stuck to my glasses © Lee Gurga
the beauty of the moment
lost to my fear of spiders
lost to my fear of spiders
~~~
after my walk:
a perfect spiderweb
stuck to my glasses © Lee Gurga
the gossamer strand
matching my white hair
matching my white hair
~~~
after my walk:
a perfect spiderweb
stuck to my glasses © Lee Gurga
yet it didn’t catch the fly
buzzing around my face
buzzing around my face
These are wonderful, Delores. I hate spiders and I am sure teh beauty of that moment would have been lost to me too. The second one is simply lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I actually don't mind spiders but my daughter doesn't like them at all.
DeleteThose gossamer strands would match my hair color too, I'm sorry to say! ;)
ReplyDeleteI figured 20 years of coloring my hair is enough.
DeleteWonderful!! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Heena!
DeleteThese are great - love the lightness - tone perfectly recaptured :)
ReplyDeleteThank you! Was hoping the tone was right.
Deletethe second my fave but the third is close runner up1 all were lots of fun to read, the last gave me ideas I should have had in the beginning but will store for future writing!
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed and they gave you ideas. There's no better time to write then now.
Deleteagreed
DeleteSuperb! All of them :)
ReplyDeleteI don't like the touch of spider webs...want my spiders in plain sight, thank you! So my tan renga matched your first response but your second is most beautiful!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully completed ... and loved the second renga very much .. though I don't like sticky spider webs on my face either! Bastet
ReplyDeleteGeorgia glad you enjoyed. Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteGeorgia glad you enjoyed. Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteWhat a sadness ... because of your anxiety with spiders you have missed the beauty ... nicely written response Dolores.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kristjann!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kristjann!
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