Carpe Diem #147 Special "Those Fireflies" by Yosa Buson
fireflies blink
in the wet grass
as night draws
in the wet grass
as night draws
~~~
fresh
cut grass
scents the evening breeze
fireflies twinkle
scents the evening breeze
fireflies twinkle
~~~
on
a summer’s eve
lost in the tall grass
chasing fireflies
lost in the tall grass
chasing fireflies
That first haiku was so beautiful Dolores
ReplyDeleteThanks -I was thinking how we ran around bare foot chasing them in our youth.
DeleteLike how you've repeated the imagery of fireflies and grass... lovely effect.
ReplyDeleteLots of good imagery here.
ReplyDeleteCaptured Fireflies
Thanks Mark
DeleteLove the first one.. a captured moment.
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful series Dolores .. I enjoyed it very much! Bastet
ReplyDeleteThanks Georgia! So glad you liked them.
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