Sunday, October 26, 2014

Helpful - Eagle's Cry

Today's prompt focused on a lovely folktale about Maidar, an apprentice of a Mongolian Shaman.



on the steppes 
an eagle’s cry echoes
life



loneliness
enters  the soul of the selfish
assistance needed

4 comments:

  1. Wonderful first haiku. The seconds looks nicely philosophical. The capcha takes so long with repeated mistakes. Would be lovely not to be put through such a test.

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    1. Thanks. Helpfulness is so much more productive to self.

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  2. A very profound and emotional Haiku.

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