tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7540147217613266830.post8235807370703589587..comments2023-03-31T05:58:06.391-07:00Comments on Ada's Poetry Alcove: The Cold Within the SoundAdas Alcovehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18010269533190196240noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7540147217613266830.post-71178702646243371012014-11-28T21:58:12.983-08:002014-11-28T21:58:12.983-08:00Thank you!Thank you!Adas Alcovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18010269533190196240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7540147217613266830.post-56795348434830025852014-11-26T18:33:58.967-08:002014-11-26T18:33:58.967-08:00Very nicely done Dolores.Very nicely done Dolores.Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10359355308140058671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7540147217613266830.post-84042988362525812702014-11-26T14:36:24.372-08:002014-11-26T14:36:24.372-08:00Thanks for your kind commentsThanks for your kind commentsAdas Alcovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18010269533190196240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7540147217613266830.post-10735314983878173802014-11-26T14:35:09.116-08:002014-11-26T14:35:09.116-08:00Thank you!Thank you!Adas Alcovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18010269533190196240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7540147217613266830.post-57485684310224409462014-11-26T14:34:48.141-08:002014-11-26T14:34:48.141-08:00Thank for your opinion!Thank for your opinion!Adas Alcovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18010269533190196240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7540147217613266830.post-82885142828113053432014-11-26T12:52:34.097-08:002014-11-26T12:52:34.097-08:00Amazing how one poem can inspire another and they ...Amazing how one poem can inspire another and they share elements but they also have their own "cold voice"<br />Nicely done DoloresAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7540147217613266830.post-49331935676106821142014-11-26T04:23:31.998-08:002014-11-26T04:23:31.998-08:00Wonderful - first version best, definitely, and a ...Wonderful - first version best, definitely, and a nice, warm series after.PirateGunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02619759991219830629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7540147217613266830.post-42200187195352910282014-11-25T23:18:01.180-08:002014-11-25T23:18:01.180-08:00A lovely series! A lovely series! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7540147217613266830.post-29261550150623052562014-11-25T20:06:54.994-08:002014-11-25T20:06:54.994-08:00Very nice
Much love...Very nice<br /><br />Much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7540147217613266830.post-60737293414733887782014-11-25T18:42:43.433-08:002014-11-25T18:42:43.433-08:00That one was written during our horrible ice storm...That one was written during our horrible ice storm a few years ago! Thanks for the in put on the first poem. I think I like the simple on better. Thanks for your kind comments.Adas Alcovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18010269533190196240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7540147217613266830.post-10682590692321825882014-11-25T18:06:53.195-08:002014-11-25T18:06:53.195-08:00These are just wonderful --!
Of all of them, I lik...These are just wonderful --!<br />Of all of them, I like the second the best -- it really has Rengetsu's elegant, polished tone - and the scene is beautiful --- with a bit of a puzzle to chew on, too (the shadows feeding the fire). In your first poem, the simplicity of the first version gives it so much extra impact. (Though both versions are great!)<br />You really ran with this -- and they're so well done! Brava ---<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com