Here are a few haiku written by Jack Kerouac:
In my medicine cabinet,
the winter fly
has died of old age.
The summer chair
rocking by itself
In the blizzard
My attempts to write in the same spirit:
in the lamp globe
30 ladybugs
dehydrated
30 ladybugs
dehydrated
~
wildflowers picked
among the nettles
beauty short lived
among the nettles
beauty short lived
~
military gravestones
poised in white formation
all dominos fall
poised in white formation
all dominos fall
delightful!
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed them!
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ReplyDeleteWhat a great response - they're all fantastic, but I can really see Kerouac in the first :)
ReplyDeleteWow Dolores, these are really great ... I think I agree with bioli the first one say Kerouac!
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